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    托福作文中怎么避免中式英语
    2018-01-02 17:40:11      来自: 重庆环球教育学校      点击: 760

      很多考生以为托福作文是一件非常轻松的事情。从开始学习英文,就开始写作文,以为托福作文跟他是差不多的,其实不然,两者千差万别!很多同学受思维限制,写作文是先用中文的方式想好,再翻译成英文的,可是一不小心就成了中式英语,这对于托福考试来讲,是一件非常尴尬的事情!下面环球教育就给大家整理了一些语句,希望对大家有帮助!

     

      1、Original: If we agree to say that school offers us the best book knowledge acquisition then our society offers us the best surviving techniques in a hard way。

      Revised: If we agree that school offers the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge, then our society offers us the best method for acquiring common sense or “street smarts”。

      Agree to say that表达中式化,只需要agree that即可;the best book knowledge acquisition改为the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge(学校给我们提供了获取书本知识的最好方法)更为恰当 ,同样后面的the best surviving techniques改为the best method for acquiring common sense,加上street marks(街头智慧)给文章的托福词汇增添色彩。

    托福写作技巧

      2、Original: They can spend more time studying education and communication to improve their role as a mother, wife and daughter。

      Revised: They can also decide to spend more time studying, education themselves, in order to improve themselves in their roles as mothers, wives and daughters。

      原句中studying education and communication的说法中式化,不符合英语的表述,应该为studying,educating themselves。除了词语表达,此句中还存在其他问题,如名词单复数的使用:不是提高他们的角色,而是提高他们自身以扮演好母亲角色。

      还有,女性不止一个人。很多人都在扮演母亲角色,role和mother应用复数,故将improve their role as a mother改为improve themselves in their roles as mother;同样,为保持一致,wife和daughter也可用复数,原文中wife的复数写法有误,应该是wives。

     

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      3、Original:If you can get the point of communication by watching TV,will you...?

      Revised:If one can learn about communicating from television,will you...?

      原句的get the point of communication by watching TV表达不清,让人难以理解,应该是指“从电视上学习交际”:learn about communicating from television。

     

      以上就是环球教育整理的全部内容了,其实托福作文最重要的就是思维,只要多练习,多理解,肯定可以有很大的收获。最后,祝愿所有的考生考试顺利!


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