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    托福写作中常见的13种错误用法你“踩雷”了吗?
    2018-07-31 11:26:57      来自: 重庆环球教育学校      点击: 324

      1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

      改进:Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.

      2. For example, you work in a big factory.

      改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

      3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

      改进:You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

      4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

      改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

      5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

      改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

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      6. Their brain is still very young.

      改进: They are still immature.

      7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

      改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

      8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

      改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

      9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

      改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

      10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

      改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

      11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

      改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

      12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

      改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

      13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

      改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

      以上就是重庆环球教育托福频道为大家整理的托福写作中13个常见语病分析,希望对大家有帮助,有则改之,无则嘉勉不要犯错,更多资讯、资料请访问重庆托福培训学校环球教育托福写作频道!


     

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