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    增强雅思写作语句表现力的5种方法
    2019-03-28 15:35:35      来自: 重庆环球教育学校      点击: 624

      本站小编为各位考生整理了增强雅思写作语句表现力的5种方法,供考生们参考使用,更多雅思资讯请继续关注本网站雅思频道。

      一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

      1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。

      Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

      Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

      Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

      2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词

      1) Weak: The team members are good players.

      Revision: The team members play well.

      2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

      Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

      3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:

      1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.

      Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

      2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.

      Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

      二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了

      1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.

      Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

      2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.

      Better: She compares prices and quality.

      三、尽量运用主动语态

      1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.

      Better: Charity has supported the organization.

      2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

      Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

      四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。

      1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

      Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

      2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

      Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

      3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

      Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

      4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

      Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

      五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

      1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

      Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.

      2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

      Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

      以上就是小编为大家整理的增强雅思写作语句表现力的5种方法,更多资讯、资料请访问本站雅思培训频道。

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