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    雅思线图作文8分范文赏析
    2019-04-09 16:25:10      来自: 重庆环球教育学校      点击: 148

      下面是雅思培训班的一名学员关于雅思8分作文,请请参考,内容如下:

      剑8 TEST 4

      The graph gives information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by different modes of transport. In the period, the amounts of goods transported by road, water and pipeline increased while the counterpart of rail leveled off at approximately 40 million tonnes.

      In 1974, 70 million tonnes of goods were delivered via road while only few goods (roughly 5million tonnes) were carried via pipeline. Water transported 40 million tonnes goods as many as the rail did. 一句话使用了三个不同的动词表达运输。

      Over the first four years, the quantities of goods transported by road and pipeline grew steadily while the mount of goods transported by water and rail reached a plateau at 40 million tonnes. 与开头段的平稳表达不同。Till 1995, road and rail witnessed growth in cargo delivery, rising to approximately 60 and 20 million tonnes respectively. 表示趋势的不同方式,同时使用分词。In 2002, the largest quantity of goods (around 100 million tonnes) was transported by road while pipeline, with about 20 million tonnes, was still the least popular transport mode. 换一种说法

      Overall, during the 28 years, road was the most prevalent way of transporting goods in the UK despite the increasing amount of freights delivered by water and pipeline. 与上文的popular同义词替代

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